There are various approaches toward children’s upbringing. Some people believe that punishment could be an effective method to be distinct right and wrong ways by kids. Others, including me, think that discipline strategies may effects significantly. Besides clarifying my point of view, different method for breeding will be discussed.
On the one side, punishment is the most common procedure for educating children, which not only is inefficient but also has reverse effects on their confidence. Punishment for children means that you just choose the right way if you are watched by your parents and teachers, so they just act as excellent kids for showing their politeness to adults or having present as a result of their obedience. Therefore, this trend does not have the root in their character and might be happened only as a result of fear. Accordingly, fear bring them the feeling of being guilty and low self-esteem in their future.
On the other hand, replacing discipline with verbal and physical punishment would have a paramount impact on children’s behaviors. For example, if a kid knows that the subsequence of coming late at home is no dinner or may be cold and unpleasant food, will find out this behave could be rooted in a wrong choice. By this method, logically disciplines related to misbehavior, children would learn to determine which decision have a proper consequence and to help them take responsibility for their behavior. Therefore, giving this opportunity to kids to experience new activity and discover its consequence and making own decision for recognizing right and wrong way.
In conclusion, I strongly claim that spanking and other kinds of punishment would have a negative effect on children self-assurance and alternate discipline method could work better in teaching children how to behave.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29692832765 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01514926911 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3917086841 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.384615385 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220246137276 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733331261058 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427257895015 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124086062461 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470864519395 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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