It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The contribution of loved ones and their emotional support to a person’s life has always been rated very highly. In this regard, an opinion exists that fond relatives matter more than mates, therefore a lack of friends might be covered by family presence. Although I believe that friendship fills life with positive emotions and energy, the family provides the person with a full range of support.
On the one hand, friendship allows a person to exchange feelings and experiences with people in whom they perceive mutual interest. Communication with like-minded ones makes a human happier and lifts their spirits. Moreover, the opportunity to share longing with a fellow and receive back an understanding is necessary for psychological health. For instance, in the movie The Intouchables paralyzed millionaire Philippe and his new helper Driss changed each other’s lives through their close and sincere relationship. That is why unity and energy sharing with people they like are substantial for human nature.
On the other hand, the family carries the most important upbringing function and the seriousness of it cannot be denied. From an early childhood and throughout the life, parents explain the norms of behavior in the society to their offsprings. People gain an understanding about etiquette, morality, law, education and the rest from those who gave birth to them. The brilliant example is the British Royal Family, where raising children is a whole well thought system that ends with the appearance of impeccable ladies and gentlemen. Thus, the contribution of family members to personal development is so multifaceted that it cannot be underestimated.
To conclude, I believe that comparison between participation of fellows and kins in a person's life makes no sense. The former are ready to appear with emotional support at the right time, while the latter give invaluable growth in all spheres of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33114754098 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89611588764 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63606557377 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.695850551 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102968965306 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338765909643 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396497448142 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592260215165 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488313017975 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.