Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.
In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?
Certainly, English is international language as many regions expand this language to communicate with several countries so it is crucial for humans to have a profound in this language. However, local languages are also essential for people because it’s attached with their nation’s cultures and traditions. Due to these it is mandatory for everyone to learn English but it’s meaning is not to forget their own mother tounge as well as it is duty of all natives to take some necessary steps to prevent their local language like start to speak in their own language with their other region citizens and school must teach these language in the education centre.
In my perception, it is essential for all to get a vast amount of English the reason is that English is working as form of foreign language among the worldwide. In addition to this, it’s mandatory for scientists, doctors, engineers and etcetera have good command and proficiency over the English language as the all conferences as well as meetings regarding to any research , new methods of ailments treatments and so on will be sometime held in the overseas so that is why all the conversations which is in english if anyone have not better in this language than it is perilous for them to well comprehend the intentions of meetings. Even though, nowadays a huge number of students migrating in foreign nations to get higher education so it is important for them to be familiar with this language. For example, today more and more learners from undeveloped regions go into develop countries for better study and futures from the all parts of the world but at first it is necessary for them to pass out the IELTS test ( international English language testing system ) after that foreign colleges and universities offer them admissions.
There are multifarious steps to prevent the local language and the main is that it is reality that entered of other languages are detrimental for native languages because majority of people avoid to speak their mother tongue . However, if any citizens can try to do conversions with own language than others natives also influenced upon them as humans are social animals and often attract to see others. Furthermore, regime makes rules for schools and government offices to must involve local language in works because it’s attached with country’s cultures and rituals as well teach learners this language. Apart from this, authorities organise campaigns to educate people about their mother lounge and motivate them to conversations in same languages . For instance, French is local language of the Canadian natives and it’s crucial for all schools to teach students French to attach them with their cultures. In conclusion, although it is important for all to have good knowledge about English but it’s means is not to negligible their local language as well as it is responsibility of regime and local citizens to take necessary steps to save local languages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...is not to forget their own mother tounge as well as it is duty of all natives to ...
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Suggestion: this language; these languages
...r region citizens and school must teach these language in the education centre. In my percep...
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...ll as meetings regarding to any research , new methods of ailments treatments and ...
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...ersations which is in english if anyone have not better in this language than it is ...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'bettered', 'welled'.
Suggestion: bettered; welled
... which is in english if anyone have not better in this language than it is perilous fo...
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...sary for them to pass out the IELTS test international English language testing s...
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...national English language testing system after that foreign colleges and universi...
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Suggestion: avoid speaking
...ve languages because majority of people avoid to speak their mother tongue . However, if any c...
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... them to conversations in same languages . For instance, French is local language...
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...ations in same languages . For instance, French is local language of the Canadian...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, well, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2508.0 1615.20841683 155% => OK
No of words: 489.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12883435583 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80041178525 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445807770961 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 787.5 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.2011581175 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 192.923076923 106.682146367 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6153846154 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183951269071 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762044720205 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445791327721 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132902954614 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00178792422322 0.056905535591 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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