A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
It is true that these days, tourism has become a primary source of income in many countries around the world. While I understand that the government may see managed incorrectly tourism system as a cause of issues, I firmly hold the view that the disadvantages pale in comparison with the advantages that this business activity provides.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why tourism is problematic. Firstly, tourism industries exert a negative effect on our environment. Many people usually destroy natural habitats to make way for excessive buildings such as hotels, restaurants, and roads for the purpose of developing tourism. Besides, this business activity can also create waste and pollution which may lead to global warming and ozone layer depletion. Secondly, local traditions may be lost because of tourism. It could be explained by the fact that since tourism allows bringing different cultures from other countries into ours, our national identity can disappear.
On the other hand, tourism’s benefits outweigh its problems. One of the main advantages of tourism is that it is a crucial key industry providing a great deal of income. A good telling example is that tourism spends a huge amount of money on transportation, tourist guides, book, etc. Moreover, in terms of employment, tourism provides more job opportunities for local people due to demands for goods and services. This results in not only improving residents’ standard of living but also boosting the national economy.
In conclusion, despite several disadvantages that tourism cause to the government and traditional cultures, it seems to me that tourism is more advantageous regarding nations’ economy and employment for local people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37867647059 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92543351045 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636029411765 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7272116324 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32722685932 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108769952824 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541264603837 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1921708813 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338098354424 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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