There is a debate that weather earning too much money good or bad. Some opines that the government should imply a restriction for earning level. However, others, myself included, think that extreme income have loads of advantages for both autorities and the people.
On the one hand, imposing the rules of wages restriction might ensure that people of all walks of life will receive a good amount of money, and their will not be so much difference in a society amongst people. To give an example, if the people of a soceity earn from 10000-50000, their life standard will be quite same and they will not get chance to insult anybody for their income. Therefore, the inhabitant of this society will lead a good life and there will not too much difference within people.
On the other hand, earning a higher level of money have lots benefits. Firstly, the employment will rise if some people income a outstanding level. The luxury hotels, for instance, are dependent of the richest people all over the world where more than five hundred people work. If there is no people incoming extra, there will be no guests in those hotels and those will be closed, and people will unemplyed. Furthermore, incoming too much money is good for government. Resident have to pay Tax basing on their income, if some people receives lots of money they have to pay that much Tax to the government. As a result of this, the economy of this country will strengthen from extreme income.
To conclude, though there is a chance of maintain similarity into society through imposing barriers on too much income, it can bear loads of benefits for the people and the economy with Tax. So, i think there sould not be any restriction on how much a person can earn.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...loyment will rise if some people income a outstanding level. The luxury hotels, f...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he people and the economy with Tax. So, i think there sould not be any restrictio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, i think, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73026315789 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42040001215 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490131578947 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8034448001 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210008723546 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862440475028 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433794616795 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137651204834 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06070392222 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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