In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment.
What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays there are many countries in the world in which highly qualified graduates do not find employment or find an job for which they are overspecialized. This happens in rich and developed countries as well, such as Italy. It has been a well-known issue there for decades.
This problem, though, has yet to be solved there and also in many other countries. A possible plan for decreasing its impact might be a statal action focused on investments on the post-education phase of a graduate and research, the latter being a strategic sector that experiences the same struggle.
First of all, a plan like this aims to reducing the discrepancy between the number of graduated people and the job requests from companies, industries and research businesses. That difference has to decrease in order to start weakening that issue. Another important aspect to take into account is the fact that many companies , in countries with this problem, tend to be less competitive and innovative, resulting in an environment where there is little need for highly specialized people, such as graduates. As an example, there are plenty of cases in Italy where people with scientific Master's degrees work in places where a simple high school diploma is necessary. Moreover, Their salaries are not that higher than unspecialised staff.
This leads to another important side of the main issue, which is the little paychecks graduated people often get in countries where this important problem persists. It is hence necessary a statal incentive on industries to pay their graduates more.
In conclusion, we can say that it is extremely important to have statal incentives and investments on industry and research. This is a key passage to see a solution for this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...raduates do not find employment or find an job for which they are overspecialized....
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13588850174 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90406503887 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3678924686 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178965276137 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579033321369 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414341670619 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102165745139 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268074591961 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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