Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
A sizable number offenders re-offend after they are released from Jail. There are several reasons for this problem but it is not an insurmountable problem if some measures are taken by the government to address the problem.
Unemployment and lack of education are the major causes of the problem. To begin with, people who commit crimes often have no other way of making a living. In addition, the prison system can make the situation worse. Prison are to some extent "school of crime". This means that offenders mix with other criminals who can be a negative influence, whereby they become more capable and determined criminals than when they entered. A criminal record makes finding job more difficult. Therefore many prisoners re-offend when they are released. At the same time, prisons should provide education or vocational training. Because a vast majority of offenders suffer from a low level of education, they usually need to continue their education to further education. It gives them better opportunities to find a job and open the door to better future prospect for them.
Training and rehabilitation are the keys remedies to detoxify offenders problem. firstly, some actionable training, vocational training for instance, and also some education which can help them to find a job and improve their living condition when their conviction period has ended. Besides, rehabilitation programs prepare them to release in society. Moreover, community service is another way to reform them. it makes them useful in their society and can improve their confidence and self-esteem. They might be required to talk to a school group or clean public area.
In conclusion, the problem will only be solved if government plans to reform offenders through community service and provides them with education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35763888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81678985253 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9700662415 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2105263158 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261198356307 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724328587048 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655110896146 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15669344563 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877761447313 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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