Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school. Some people believe that this is a negative development while others think there are some benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, there has a tendency of people dedicating a huge amount of time commuting to work or school. Some individuals believe that this will exert myriad benefits, while others express an opposing viewpoint. From my perspective, while the former view is plausible to a certain extent, I would side with those who support the former argument.
On the one hand, those who advocate that advantages gained from the trend of people spending more time on shuttling tend to point out a combination of evident merits. The initial merit is that laborers or students could take the advantage of time spent on travelling between different places to catch up on some unfinished work. For example, high school students, while shifting between home and school, could finish their homework if they were unable to complete the day before. Another advantage is that those laborers who are occupied with work could make use of commuting time on bus or train for entertainment such as listening to music or watching films . As a result, they can save a certain amount of time for recreational activities, which might be replaced by time for working or taking care of their offspring.
On the other hand, as sensible and beneficial as it is, I concur with those who advocate the view that more time wasted on the commuting process might have adverse impacts on individuals’ health and time for other activities. To begin with, individuals being stuck in traffic jams during rush hours or breathing in toxic fumes may lead to a variety of health problems. For instance, being exposed to traffic cacophony for a long time may possibly lead to headache or even hearing loss in the long run. Additionally, spending more time shifting between various places could leave less time for other more important activities. In fact, there are other more vital activities that should be spent on by individuals such as pursuing one’s hobby or spending time with loved ones.
In conclusion, as both dark and bright sides of the picture are noticed, it is understandable why many people believe that more time should be spent on traveling to work or school due to some benefits it may bring, I am convinced that the opposite is true in most contexts.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... as listening to music or watching films . As a result, they can save a certain am...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: may; possibly
...ed to traffic cacophony for a long time may possibly lead to headache or even hearing loss i...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'may'.
Suggestion: may
...ed to traffic cacophony for a long time may possibly lead to headache or even hearing loss i...
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Line 5, column 776, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hobby or spending time with loved ones. In conclusion, as both dark and bright s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90263157895 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64315539025 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2821780734 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.071428571 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30793154375 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110105091667 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772197828157 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207774559393 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544376307379 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... as listening to music or watching films . As a result, they can save a certain am...
^^
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: may; possibly
...ed to traffic cacophony for a long time may possibly lead to headache or even hearing loss i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'may'.
Suggestion: may
...ed to traffic cacophony for a long time may possibly lead to headache or even hearing loss i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 776, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hobby or spending time with loved ones. In conclusion, as both dark and bright s...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90263157895 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64315539025 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2821780734 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.071428571 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30793154375 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110105091667 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772197828157 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207774559393 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544376307379 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.