Many people keep dogs and cats as companions.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole.
From the history of civilization, animals have been the companion of human beings in many ways. Nowadays there is an increase in the love of people towards the tamed animals for varying reasons. However, the trend of surged pet ownership has its own pros and cons to the individual and to the society. This essay intends to analyse the both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold benefits can be accounted for having pets. First and foremost, the concept of family in the modern world is changed drastically from the past years where, people prefer to live as single compared to the nuclear and joint families. Hence, pets like cat and dog may have a definite role in many folk’s life as a protective guard and a companion in leaps and bounds. Moreover, a tamed and trained dog can assure the safety of many communities not only by acting as a house guard but also by a bomb squad. For instance, many dogs are in every countries defence department to ensure the safety and quality. Thus, having these cat species as a companion benefits both t o the individual and society to a great extent. In contrary, it has a thorny side too.
To commence with, managing a pet with all the necessities are sometimes a burden for many people because the food and the accessories are much expensive, and many cannot afford. It can be seen that without a proper care and love these animals may become stray dogs or cats and can be a burden to the society by harming others. To demonstrate, there is a recent report published in Australia that a pet dog harmed a child of 6 years when the parents were away from the home. Thence, as animals lack logical thinking and reasoning, the unexpected behaviour can sometimes take the life of people.
To recapitulate, even though there are a few negatives with the pet ownership its merits far outweigh the demerits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...d. For instance, many dogs are in every countries defence department to ensure the safety...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for instance, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68389057751 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58219164915 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8731912763 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274400586322 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785888664446 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528443530881 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151191181581 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489975814954 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.