Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
It is true that in many countries the market share of foreign movies is bigger than domestically produced films. I think there are a lot of reasons why this is the case. In my opinion, governments should promote local film-making by subsidizing this industry.
There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. First of all, the established film industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action and special effects. Hollywood blockbuster like “Avatar “or James Bond films are the examples of such production, and their global appeal is undeniable. Another reason why foreign film is so successful is that they often invite famous actors and actresses, and they are made by most accomplished producers and directors.
From my perspective, governments should support local film industries financially. In every country, there may be talented film-makers who just need to be given opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, they need funds to pay for film crews, actors and other expenses related to producing high-quality films. If governments did help with these expenditures, they would see an increase in employment in the film industry, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. New Zealand, for instance, has seen an increase in tourism related to the Lord of the Rings films.
To conclude, I believe that the increased financial aids can raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, for instance, i think, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88682182242 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.683679037 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.230769231 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420620709727 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142273610695 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963685010313 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239331994648 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633349408505 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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