Many people think that public celebrations (like national holidays, festivals etc.) are a waste of money and that the government should spend those funds in a better way. Do you agree or disagree?
Celebrations are integral part of our life which contributes to community participation. However, however, some people feel that public celebrations are not useful and it is kind of waste of time and money, I believe that there are so many reasons why people should give importance to public celebrations in our busy life.
To begin with, national festivals would foster national integration which would promote a sense of national and cultural identity among people in a multicultural society. When people celebrate an occasion together, they may forget about their religious, cultural or other differences which would boost solidarity and patriotic in the society. Another best thing about pubic celebrations is that they can bring people together. Nowadays, it is not uncommon for different members of a family to live in different parts of the world that they can hardly find an opportunity to meet on another, so in most cases festivals would be the only occasions they get together. For instance, for celebrating Christmas not only families live apart, but also the people of the whole community gathering in the churches. Christmas has also the busiest shopping season. People would spend enormous amounts of money for purchasing gifts, sweets and fireworks that might has a directly impact on economic growth.
Lastly, these great occasions are beneficial to exhibit the tradition of a country or a community. Holding the celebrations would be the best way to protect a culture from extinction. Besides, it would provide a chance for the young generation to understand and follow their traditional values and styles. For instance, during national festivals people are usually wearing their traditional dresses and enjoying customary foods.
By way of conclusion, although a group of people may argue that these kinds of celebrations would be overspending of a country, it seems to me that these occasions should be given more attention as they maintain cultural identity especially for the future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, lastly, may, so, for instance, kind of, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35736677116 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88909528941 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3142470345 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.071428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185256221503 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638929945215 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570014809918 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1169191686 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496978676289 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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