Many top universities are providing online courses to students as an alternative of on campus cause everyone can have access to them. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Opinions are divided as to whether or not academic institutions should supersede traditional lectures in the university by courses on online platforms. In my opinion, while some assert that this phenomenon has some drawbacks, it is not to say that online classrooms do not have any redeeming features.
On the one hand, there are some justifications why the replacement of on-campus classes with virtual lectures is perceived as a disadvantaged trend. Firstly, online meetings can only be conducted in places where cutting-edge technology is present. In particular, if some parts the world lack high-speed Internet and adequate devices, an online meeting might be interrupted abruptly due to the intermittent connection. Therefore, this is a task of challenge for both teachers and students to discuss thoroughly the lessons, which causes some misleading to be present. Second, when students learn online, some fundamental activities that provide empirical experience would be reduced. For example, learners major in chemistry can only grasp theoretical knowledge via virtual lessons but cannot gain access to conduct chemical reactions. This means that they do not know about the ways that reactants interact and accumulate practical knowledge to yield the purest products.
On the other hand, I believe that academic courses on the internet play a pivotal role.
To begin with, virtual interaction offers members of tertiary schools increased flexibility, which allows them to balance the demand for work, study and family. To be more specific, instead of spending hours commuting to schools and inch along in a bumper-to-bumper traffic, adult students and teachers can manage their schedule and devote more time to revise the lesson and educate their children. Furthermore, virtual lectures enable students from all over the world to acquire up-to-the-minute knowledge. For instance, though doctors in the highlands of Vietnam are separated by geographical barriers, they can still attend lectures of Continuing medical education programs held in megacities and around the globe to update themselves with state-of-the-art medical technology and modern medical treatments.
In conclusion, to some people, although providing courses to replace conventional ones may have negative outcomes, I believe that the positive results are of fundamental importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71388101983 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08161916307 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631728045326 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5426387698 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.466666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7333333333 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183841936212 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543591191918 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322515753599 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949760583812 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423288318603 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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