more and more people are migrating to cities in search of better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. how can government make urban life better for everyone?
It is true that immigration is increasingly growing due to urbanization of more cities. However living in cities is fraught with many problems, government can be taken some appropriate measures to make city life more attractive and vibrant.
Residing in cities accompany with different difficulties. The most significant problem that these people face is high property prices. In many cities buying a house near the center is out of reach for people on the average salary, and they are compelled to live outside the city and commute into work. Another serious issue is traffic and air pollution which is due to overcrowding in most big cities. Because of inadequate transportation facilities most people prefer to use their own vehicle. The exhaust fumes from cars cause air pollution which in turn damage people’s health, and may make suffer from heart problems or respiratory diseases such as asthma. A further complication can be unemployment. In other words, due to overpopulation in large cities most people should compete to each other to get a position in job market, so those people who do not have job experience or vocational training could not be succeed.
Government should be taken some measures to alleviate the problems attributed to living in big and bustling cities. Regarding the high cost of houses and apartments, the government can assist people by providing grant and subsidized loans in order to constructing their homes. Also, authority should support mass construction programs which may lead to building affordable houses for low income families. The problem of air pollution can be addressed by introducing a traffic restriction law to ban private cars from entering the city center, so the number of car on the road will diminish. If the transportation facilities were improved, more people would be encouraged to use public transport rather than their own cars, which would reduce the level of air pollution significantly.
In conclusion, although immigration to large cities has a lots of beneficial, due to more facilities, that can improve the quality of life, it has own difficulties, so the government should be taken some steps to deal with them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...due to overcrowding in most big cities. Because of inadequate transportation facilities...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...lthough immigration to large cities has a lots of beneficial, due to more facilities, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20963172805 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98516637573 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555240793201 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0522479105 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.9375 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294195959593 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950511519006 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901063830172 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222146052865 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090509293815 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.