Most countries spend much money on education as they start to realise the importance of education. in your opinion which two subjects are the most important for you and people and which one is the least important.
in the era of modernization, education juggles multiple roles in diverse setting which contribute to the national abundant. Comprehending the significant influence of education, the majority of country spending magnificant budget to expand it. In my point , the money could be rational to spend more in social ad science subjects such as linguishtic and physic than physical education.
With the propensity of globalization , linguishtics consider to be an crucial academy section . For instance, language is a key to link internationally to diverse domains namely as commercial, cultural, global organzation such as ASEAN ,EU,..In addition , with foreign language, student can broaden their knowledge outside their country. For stimulating the ablity of analysing, physics is the practical subject for student which can back up them to virtually in real life. In detail, most of phenomenom in the world stem form physics frontier For example, student can able analysing the root of the rain implemented from the feature of liquid in physic. with the fundemental impact on life, investing more money in physics consider to be an optinum operation to boosting student practical knowledge and logic analysing. One of the particular evidence is England, with the multiple investment of science platform including physic subject, British generate many geneious scientists anually .
Besides , physical education is considered to be the least essential to education system in most of country. The main factor of this situation is the efficient of the subject. Because school have to teaching a thousand student daily, supplying demand of student in this subject is difficult. For instance, PE include many sports such as footbal, volleyball, tennis , basketball which is too expensive to supply all the equipment of these sport. Moreover, students can improve health by various method domestically . To illustrate, students can train fitness , playing soccer, and many others physical activity after school day in sport center.
In conclusion, while every subjects has an unique function to student , perspectively , i think that linguistic and physic are crucial subject which significantly impact to country and education future.In addition ,PE is the least important subject because of its diversity in supplying facility ,.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63610315186 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03639270101 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601719197708 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8121621612 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.9375 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193775051003 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613636190435 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628331282787 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132222341774 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492548244308 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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