As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Essay topics:

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.

What factors contribute to job satisfaction?

How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

In our contemporary life, there are varying notions of job satisfaction, which is ascribed to play a crucial role in creating happiness in the workers' life. Several debates are taken the influencing factors and the reality of this issue. However, towards the employees who spend their life earning for livings, its impacts to their spiritual comfort in career is indisputable.

First and foremost, a job which can boost their productivity should be their choice. It means that the work is their passion and they are willing to do day by day, not because of the family traditional orientation or parents' expectation. Secondly, the dead-end jobs are totally the main reason lead to job dissatisfaction at the workplace. The efforts they made have to be paid with reasonable salaries to meet their standard needs of themselves and their families. For imagination, the employees with nine-to-five job but get a pittance are easy to give up and seek for a more lucrative career. Last but not least, the working environment is of paramount importance to raise the workers' inspiration. Its implications not only consists of mental and physical health but also the friendly atmosphere with colleagues and seniors. Apparently, workload pressure and tension will drag their morale down and lower the working efficiency.

Nevertheless, not everybody has the same opportunities to chase their dreams and get the suitable job. Furthermore, all workers need to know their abilities and do not ask for much higher condition at the workplace just for their job satisfaction.

To sum up, there are a great amount of elements contributing to the employees happiness in work and the one need solving could be the spiritual burden. All companies also pay attention to their staffs situation of health, incomes and working relationship.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25938566553 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0043630207 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.135359031 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277591625024 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878156697801 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529276461243 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166484772196 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457917339009 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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