Music is played in every society and culture in the world today.
Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In salad days of millennium, music plays a predominant role in every society, religion and culture around the world. However, different people have distinct mindsets regarding this. A section of individuals believes that music has always a positive impact on society as well as individuals. While other people think reverse of it. The upcoming fragments would shed light on both the approaches before making a final note.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favor. First and foremost, music has a direct effect on our hormones which boost mood and enhance brain's production. Even some doctors suggest music therapy to recovery rate. Moreover, the type of music one listen relative to actions. For instance, it is hard to hit the gym without music as it improves performance than others who exercise without music. It also helps in learning and recalls information more sufficiently, such as learning a new language. Additionally, music is the identity of every culture and region. It is hard to imagine public events or ceremonies without music.
Shifting towards the second school of thought that negative impact of music. Listening to sad notes, give rise to negative thoughts which leads to depression. To illustrate, the notorious song 'Gloomy Sunday' that connects to many deaths. Around 10 people had suicide after listening this song and at last, government had to ban this song. Furthermore, some piece of songs shows violence and have a great impact on youth which may be harmful to society.
Having discussed the arguments and counterarguments, I would like to infer that music is a form of out and brings benefit physically as well as psychological to individual and community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, while, even so, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14840989399 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78487826556 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643109540636 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.934923441 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6842105263 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8947368421 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349273223081 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907592836288 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637091637957 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190184539704 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757148180422 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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