Nowadays, more and more women decide to have children later in their life? why? Does the advantage or disadvantage?
In this contemporary society, having children later in life has recently become a common choice of many women. There are many reasons behind this trend, and my firm conviction is that it is more likely to bring about disadvantageous outcomes to life.
With regard to the factors that lead to later pregnancy, many parents are more enthusiastic in their career development. In addition to that, it is the age of earning more salaries, achieving higher promotion in workplace to support daily expenses. As a result, aldults do not readily expect to experience their marriage life and determine to postpone their first childbirth. Secondly, many people consider that they need more experience before entering special stage of life with their soulmates. Hence, many modern people tend to marry in their late 30s or 40s. This careful consideration not only helps aldults to become more ready to have babies, but it also increases their responsibilities for their children.
However, delaying pregnancy can lead to many outrageous drawbacks to both mothers and children. It is often a fact that having offspring after 35 can negatively affect children health. For instance, many related diseases such as Down, malnourishment can appear and children may die in their premature time. Moreover, the physical condition of women would be significantly weaken. Pregnancy is widely believed to be a harsh process which decline health condition. Therefore, females who in their late 30s can face with more health related risks and lose persistence.
Taking everything into consideration, developing occupation and enhancing more experience are what later pregnancy is all about. However, this trend can lead to many setbacks that do harm to both mothers and children health
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o later pregnancy, many parents are more enthusiastic in their career development...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34172661871 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87916554298 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60071942446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7378258271 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315116345447 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100641981148 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061370449455 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192995818245 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716542905709 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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