Online shopping is increasing dramatically How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required

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Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required?

It is true that social members are purchasing their accoutrements through the Internet more frequently. In my opinion, this tendency
significantly influences the environment as well as labor market because of the following reasons.

Regarding the environment, a double-edged impact can be easily witnessed when online shopping becomes prevalent. On the one hand, transaction through the internet obviously does not involve commuting, so it is believed to discourage the use of private vehicles. Therefore, this declined transportation acts as a catalyst in reducing carbon footprint, which can halt air pollution and alleviate global warming. On the other hand, however, in comparison to traditional stores, online retailers inevitably have to increase the amount of disposable package to maintain products’ integrity during delivery. Consequently, not only does this lead to an excessive load of non-biodegradable waste, which poses challenge to waste management, but also over consumes finite resources like plants or fossil fuel.

Regarding the employment, the uplifted popularity of online business is accompanied by a high demand in a number of occupations. To begin with, the trend has been observed to promote telemarketing. Indeed, since purchases are accomplished through broadband connection, real interactions between consumers and suppliers are becoming scarce; hence, modes of communication which do not involves face-to-face contact stand out as the most potential strategy to create brand awareness among prospective customers. In addition, it is understandable that the more occasionally citizens experience online shopping, they more likely they are to be victims of online scams or computer hackers. Thus, if firms launch their products on the Internet, employees with computer literacy, who can assure cyber security and maintain the system’s proper operation, will be extremely vital.

Briefly, no sooner does shopping on the Internet rocket than its effects on the ecological systems and required occupations become discernible.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...frequently. In my opinion, this tendency significantly influences the environment...
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Line 4, column 712, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wasting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wasting
...degradable waste, which poses challenge to waste management, but also over consumes fini...
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Line 6, column 384, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'involve'?
Suggestion: involve
...ce, modes of communication which do not involves face-to-face contact stand out as the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, hence, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91304347826 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23551587718 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702341137124 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1226232139 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5384615385 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123716605191 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039561827525 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303562460129 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601140020083 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183884929442 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.06 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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