The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Traffic problem has become a serious issue nowadays and according to many people, the only way to get rid of this problem is to restrict people's need to go outside. In my opinion, limiting people’s need to go outside would be problematic and the best solution could be increasing public transport on the road.
Limiting people’s need to go outside will have serious consequences on the country's economy. In other words, if people are not allowed to go outside, the economy of the country will loose money. To give a clear illustration, most of the sector of the economy is linked to the direct interaction among people. When people will not go outside, it would affect the sale of a product in the market and consequently, the businessman will suffer loss which would eventually affect the economy.
On the other hand not allowing to go outside for education will be a hindrance in creating potential human being through education. In other words, the country will lack required amount of skilled individuals for the smooth running of the country. Although many people say that online education is a good solution, researcher says that online education doesn't prepare a student fully for the future challenges of life. As a result, due to a lack of proper education, the country will not have properly educated individuals for solving the country's problem and working for it’s development.
The best solution to this problem would be to impose tax on private transport and allow more public transport on road. This is going to reduce traffic congestion on the road as well as allow more people to travel to their destination within a short amount of time. In addition, it will not affect the country's economy and allow opportunities for proper education for the inhabitants of the country.
While people may disagree, I think that allowing more public transport on the road is the best way to solve this problem
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...trys economy. In other words, if people cant go outside, economy of the country will...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...go outside, economy of the country will loose money. To give a clear illustration, mo...
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Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...nomy. On the other hand not allowing to go outside for education will be a hindran...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
..., researcher says that online education doesnt prepare a student fully for the future ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, while, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92628205128 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57833988032 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471153846154 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3706955161 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17995659112 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707935109712 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490626713521 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100375472174 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548028670336 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.