People living in large cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller towns?
Nowadays, populations of urban areas are increasing quickly. However, they must confront more problems in their life day by day. Therefore, governments should encourage some people transfer from city to countryside. In this essay, I will look at some of the issues of this situation. I also will then move on to consider a lot of reasons governments should conduct to emigrate populations.
There are several problems that city-dwellers need to deal with everyday. First of all, traffic congestion is a terrible issue. In rush hour, such as 7:00 am or 5:00 pm, there are so many motorbikes, cars, buses, that hustle in most streets. In some main roads, policies have to attend to control circulation. Besides, air pollution is common in the city. Smoke from traffic facilities are major causes lead to happen pollution. In addition, people cut down trees to build apartment blocks, park, entertainment centre. Lack of trees make to reduce clean air. For example, in Ho Chi Minh City, we sometimes find a lot of trees beside the ways. Furthermore, townsmen do not ensure about quality of life. Some people live in poor housing condition and shortage of accommodation often occurs.
Regarding overload in urban areas, the government should hearten some populations to move to smaller towns. The first reason is the atmosphere . In the countryside, they can breathe in fresh air. The pollution rarely happens in there. Some regions near Ho Chi Minh City like Long An, Ben Tre, Tay Ninh. Moreover, they not only live in a spacious house but also have a comfortable. The area of a room in country is larger than room in town from two to four times.
In conclusion, when people live in city, they must face to air pollution, traffic congestion and low quality of life. The government should move more people to rural areas. I think this is a good idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9076433121 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71812408449 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624203821656 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7226329401 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.2692307692 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0769230769 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256606405004 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561040667865 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839917237292 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161355183134 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589769336223 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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