People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
It is witnessed that people could inevitably confront a range of problems when living in developed cities. While pollution is the major problem for this tendency, I agree that encouragement of transferring to regional towns is an ideal solution for them to tackle this problem.
It is undeniable that pollution has become a serious concern among citizens, who are living in developed cities for decades. Owning a remarkable population increases the number of such pollutants as carbon dioxide, which is emitted from private vehicles such as motorbikes or cars. Consequently, these toxic gases would have an adverse effect not only on people’s health but also on the environment as a whole. Taking Vietnam as an example, where motorbikes make up 80% of all vehicles on the streets, and people are likely to be prone to various potential health issues related to the respiratory system.
However, I believe that the solution of encouraging citizens to live in other places should be taken into account because of its benefits. First, it will reduce the number of vehicles in cities, which will improve the situation where air pollution caused by transports. Also, fewer people living in cities would reduce the demand for housing supply system because living spaces are often linked to people’s mental health. In contrast, those living in the countryside are likely to buy reasonably priced houses and enjoy a more tranquil environment rather than living in a crowded neighborhood.
In conclusion, severe air pollution is among the most serious problems in developed cities nowadays, and I believe that relocating people to other areas to live would significantly improve the situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, while, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31851851852 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86666666667 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6287147072 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.545454545 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259692048617 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936862719461 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640660215238 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16364092065 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556055642193 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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