People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
People living in cities have gained immense popularity and they are also being threatened because of overpopulation and lack of basic resources. Governments should promote occupation of smaller town’s thus would help in reducing the issues faced by the Environment. This essay will discuss on problems faced by cities and how urban areas can help to eradicate threats.
Nowadays, Increased population in cities has created several issues like Pollution, Water shortages etc. In cities, small families tend to buy cars for daily routine and is not used in an efficient manner thus wasting fuel and pollute the air. For Example, People living in huge apartments use high power motors to bring up groundwater to the surface because of which water distribution has also become an issue. Also, cities have increased use of automobiles has also created difficulty in travelling. Pollution is one of the major reasons for global warming. People should encourage public transports which would benefit for better roads and less pollution.
On the other hand, regional towns can be developed to encourage relocation which would help to maintain a balance and reduce major problems. A recent survey has stated that developing urban areas has increased its revenues by 30 % and will reduce the burden on taxpayers. Migrating to smaller towns can result in even distribution of manpower and would encourage creating more service like jobs, hospitals etc. For example, implementing small hospitals with better medical facilities in urban areas could serve better for those who have to reach out to major towns.
On a whole, it is advisable that people should migrate to smaller towns nearby which could lessen the issues faced and will promote an increased standard of living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... cars for daily routine and is not used in an efficient manner thus wasting fuel and pollute the air. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28368794326 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65251251596 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2122593039 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200145905042 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678676432189 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566346072319 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136930593992 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656727244687 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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