Many sports players advertised in sports products.Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, advertisement plays a huge role for promotions and marketing of consumer products. People tend to choose based on it's marketing methods. Promoting a merchandise with celebrities has better reach towards consumers and also tend to increase the revenue for producers. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this aspect and conclude.
Athletes are also given the position of brand ambassador which also adds on reputation and brand value. One of the major advantages of choosing athletes for product advertisements is because of huge number of fans and followers. This would drastically promote the sales of product and also promote new customers. In a recent survey it is stated that 80% of products have increased sales because of promotions by sports persons. For example, there has been an increased sales product named "BOOST" since it has been advertised by Virat Kholi and also other companies like reebok with MS Dhoni has doubled its sales.
On the other hand, when considering the disadvantages, companies tend to use these chances to increase profit and compromise the quality of products. There are certain reports that in edible products many different chemicals and steroids have been used. For example, A sports drink which was promoted saying that it would raise energy levels had hospitalised many consumers and also endangered their lives. Certain products tend to show fake reports about their product.
This essay has discussed the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements on products by celebrities.
Despite minor disadvantage, promoting a product using sports person tend to have more advantages and also has a better reach and also expansion of business. Producers should act in an ethical and nominal manner to consumers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...certain reports that in edible products many different chemicals and steroids have been used. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45519713262 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97373989151 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4645144604 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144069846164 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516327243928 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505988032207 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995580123296 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351473840498 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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