People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

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People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

Many people argue that nowadays people who live in megacities have worry many problems in their daily life. Personally I completely agree with this view

First of all there much jobs opportunities in big cities where have so much companies looking for employees or workers. However work is not for everyone , citizens should have the professional skills and knowledge to get the well-paid job so there were many migrants go to the cities didn’t get the work or doing something they didn’t suitable with.

Another problems is the cost of living in the big cities being so high. The result is many people cannot pay for their bill tax or even their house and as a consequence, they had to live in slums or the place without good facilities or clean food and clean water to use.

The second problem is the traffic jams.Beside difficult to get home at that time, they have face to many problems about their heath. The fumes from vehicles make you get it hard to breath and easy to get to be ill and the noise from the street can make people feel stress and uncomfortable.

When living in the megacities if people in the city didn’t get a job or job with bad salary many people could engage in criminal activities as a way of making a living, that makes crime rates have considerable increased in major cities in recent years.In contrast the police cannot take care for all citizens so many cases were happened and bring more concern to the people.

Because of all these problems the governments should encourage people to move to near outside of the cities.They need to convince of companies to move their build to smaller regional towns to make more job opportunities for people in there

In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, it is the government’s responsibility to look after the welfare of its people. Therefore, the migration to smaller towns could work out by providing city-like opportunities and facilities.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87164179104 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74651913282 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534328358209 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.23977385 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.2 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352270752858 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146557861409 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105655769042 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18365909847 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111788041884 0.056905535591 196% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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