People spend too much on family celebrations such as birthdays and weddings?What are the importance of these celebration?Do you think people really spend too much?
Celebration and Birthday is very important in human life, also it is memorable and pleasant time for every people. In 21st century human life is too hectic, people have no time to spend with his family and freinds but birthday and weddings gives the opportunity to meet each other and enjoy the time. Actually I does not think people spend too much time and money on birthdayas and weddings.
Let begin with, Birthdays is the very beautiful day for every people and people enjoy with his collegues and family members. Due to celebration of the birthday, people are meet to each other, spent time for family members so, people are easily understand to each other. During the birthday people are giving the gift to birthday person so, birthday person feels that peoles are loving to him. Wedding is the memorable day for every couple, because at this time two holy hearts are tie to each other. In weddings people are enjoying the dinner with his best friends also take the photos with the friends.
Furthermore, people are not spend more money on such type of occasion, albeit it is depend on economic condition of the person. For example, some people organize grand party for birthday and weddings However, some people organize only ring ceremony for weddings and cake cutting ceremony for birthdays. So, it is depend on human disposition. Same as due to hectic schedule of people. people have less time spent on such occasion, Nevertheless some people are spent more time because of the intimate relationship.
In conclusion, It is more plausible to say spending time and money are much dependent on relationship of the people and economic condition on the individual. Finally, in the modern era people are less preliction about the such occasion but still people have love towards his family members and friends so they are mostly attend weddings and birthdays and enjoy the time with the friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44135924121 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453416149068 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3154449656 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333984382548 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122667912605 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804387538948 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229733834824 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611231725035 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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