People tend to work longer hours nowadays. People say that working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their families and the society, so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?
In a developed society, people need to adapt with all the changes, especially at work. Many people argue that long average working hours can bring economic success, while I still believe that working time should be limited to ensure the employees can balance between their work and life.
Long average working time can bring some benefits to our society in all aspects of life. First and foremost, people can have a high income, and then a better standard of living to satisfy their needs and alleviate the unemployment rate. For instance, 12 hour shifts have been invested in Japan many years ago which help them boost the prospect in the GDP, rank high, and have international reputation.
It seems to me that expending work time can create various issues for the employees such as isolation and higher rate of turnover. First and foremost, people can damage the relationships between family, and society and lack of communication which separate them from the social, and suffer from the feeling of depression. As a result, employees have an enormous pressure to complete their monthly tasks for revenue. For example, children can be alone due to the lack of presence of their parents. Nevertheless, long working hours can lead to a high percentage of employees who are not satisfied with their jobs. Doing a job without satisfaction can result from the low quality of productivity, getting risks of failure, and worse performance which are the symptoms of high turnover. Therefore, people tend to leave and find other job satisfaction.
Conclusively, the inference made is that people work and earn to live and not live to earn, therefore the disproportionate extension of the working schedule is not only a deterrent to the velocities of businesses but also a menace to the human diaspora on a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01328903654 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.778624414 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0282050695 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291856501515 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103460035971 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826312558073 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193795706144 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085469472234 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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