Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
There are many games prevalent in different countries and each country have it’s own national games eluding some exception where fan club for different games are almost equal. I would like to concede with author that sports is better way in easing international tensions but author have overlooked certain situations while stating the safe nature of releasing patriotic emotions through sports. Following are the reasons for my belief.
Firstly, Today large amount of money are divested in sports sector due to it’s popularity and sports is also considered means through which international tensions are mollified. For example, India and Pakistan are not in good terms and spite among both nations is being carried on from long time. However, in playground both the teams of nation keep aside their anger or hatred and compete with each other peacefully. Such example aptly illustrates how sports can help nations to ease tensions. Both country fans come together to cheer their team. Secondly, Olympics is events which held every four year and players from almost all countries participate in events. Thus, such events really help different countries to work together to make an event successful. Thus, it would not be wrong to say that international sporting help countries to ease tensions going on between countries.
However, sports is not the safe way of releasing patriotic emotions because people watching sports became so zealous and if for whatsoever reason, team or player fail to win, people’s of losing nation start showing their violence by berating opposing team or player.
On wrapping up, Sport do alleviate international tensions going on between countries as it provide platform to work together but sometimes sports have instead exacerbate the situation/tension between countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 160, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'exacerbated'.
Suggestion: exacerbated
...ether but sometimes sports have instead exacerbate the situation/tension between countries...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48056537102 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72163725877 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618374558304 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2902886316 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270480674367 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867434558183 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910878799057 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158344234117 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179567382734 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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