At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In the old and age, there are numbers of young citizens becoming increasingly more than the elders of several nations. While a number of people believe this trend may possess some demerits, my view is that it is more likely to bring beneficial outcomes because of convincing reasons.
On the one hand, countries have the majority of youth may lead to some problems in two main fields. Firstly, educational issues are what I put my priority in. It is irrefutable that nations include a relatively large number of youngsters may concentrate on developing educational facilities in classrooms and improving their teaching programs for each suitable students. As a result, a great amount of national budget, as well as efforts, need to put in these matters. Another point I would like to mention is the younger population is, the more crime rate occurs. For example, in many developing countries, social juvenile crimes such as drug abuse, school violence or robbery increase rapidly because of lacking parental supervision, accompanied by instructions at schools.
Notwithstanding, I would argue that the advantages of higher numbers of the young population are liable to overshadow the foregoing drawbacks. In terms of economic growth, a great number of young adults in working age make a contribution to the national labor force and enhance productivity as a result. For example, in many European industrialized countries, the young are in charge of various tasks in a corporation from heavy industries to modern services; therefore, the living standard also increases in the early time. Furthermore, the youth have a tendency to acquire knowledge quicker than the old regarding the development of technology and scientific research. In consequence, there are new practical inventions from innovative ideas as well as excellent medical treatment could be appeared in the near future. From a social perspective, the dynamic and energetic characteristics of youngsters have a positive impact on building a fast-moving life. It can be seen that the elderly fail to update the latest trend and learn quickly from international cultural compared with young adults, leading to a diversified lifestyle with powerful cognition.
In conclusion, for the aforementioned discussion, I would like to reiterate that young population, albeit having some disadvantages, has benefits in economic, technological and social fields. National authorities should focus on establishing welfare system that assists on student’s education to reduce servere effects due to the lack of study.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun European seems to be countable; consider using: 'many Europeans'.
Suggestion: many Europeans
...oductivity as a result. For example, in many European industrialized countries, the young are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48492462312 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17990509596 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608040201005 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1390010054 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.411764706 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4117647059 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199882361286 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523906708316 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522914549303 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10462965833 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428232156971 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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