Prevention is better thn cure. Out of country's health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education n preventive measure. Agree or disagree??
It has been contentious issue since decades that does the government should fix their budget for improved lifestyle ,as well as ,on public awareness of health education.Investment on preventive measures are far more wise decision than treatment in illness.I completely agree with this assertion that government should spend on preventing the disease rather than illness.
One of the significant point is government budgeting on better quality of life in terms of providing food ,water and clean environment to the people much more cheaper than on their illness.These factors can contribute in wholesome and salubrious lifestyle and play major role in halting many diseases. For example , In UK , there is a flu vaccination for people in order to prevent flu and cold during winter. It shows that money spending on preventive measure is much beneficial than the treatment of disease.
Proceeding my argument further, many vaccinations programs and campaigns supported by government tend to aware public and prevent them from major diseases. awareness of many Heart diseases and cancer programs may help them to avoid those factors which leads them towards these disease.For example cholesterol is one of the factor that can cause many heart diseases. Similarly,increase use of many plastic products and food cans contain various preservatives which can cause cancer. Such type of awareness can prevent people from major diseases.
In conclusion, I personally agree with the point that government should spend more money on preventive measures and life quality in order to avoid spending money on treatment of illness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, similarly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47011952191 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01745457379 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557768924303 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.5079985016 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.555555556 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18391641056 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852797518381 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669717934195 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12954584668 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539740038852 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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