Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes when set free. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem?
After being penalized, a number of offenders are released to go back their normal lives but they keep committing crimes. There are some reasons that lead to this issue, and I believe that there are also appropriate measures can effectively address this problem.
Despite the positive aspect of being set free and having an opportunity to contribute to community, there are some factors that could make some ex-prisoners break the law again. First, they cannot integrate into community. They are more likely to be refused to employ because of their criminal history. Thus, as a result of being unemployed, they may not have a better choice than to go back to their old ways. Second, they may not willing to work as a normal person as it probably does not earn them as much money and they have to work hard too. Therefore, they can easily be enticed back to illegal activities, which may appear more lucrative.
However, there are some solutions that could be considered in dealing with this problem. First, creating suitable job opportunities can reduce the proportion of unemployed criminals. This can increase the potential of getting job and make them feel being welcomed to come back community. Second, setting retraining courses for them in the prison can help them find a job more easily. For example, they can learn to fix cars or electrical appliances, make some hand-crafted products, which can help them to appreciate the true value of working and earning money.
To conclude, ex-criminals can re-offend because of reasons coming from both themselves and communities, but with a few practical measures could efficiently resolve this issue
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...few practical measures could efficiently resolve this issue
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09926470588 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69284091489 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4384612871 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151714226486 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561368222054 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298207325969 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951926358913 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149551029623 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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