Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Should creatures be used new drugs tests and medical industry or not is a hot topic for debate. Even many people disagree with this opinion, I convinced that animals should be use in research and experiment.
The first reason is it is necessary to do medical test on new drugs to find out how safe they are, what the right dose is. In order to reduce the negative effects to human of some new medicine, it is important to try on animals and the scientist may realize some dangerous thing that affect to human.
Another strong argument is animal testing helps to advance medical and scientific knowledge. many important medical discoveries involved experimentation on animals. Some people believed that it is unnecessary to use creatures in research because we have computer simulation. In my front of view, it is impossible for this method to replace the animals. The expert need to watch the process on a living creature so that they can have the most reliable consequence. As a result, animals have many important contributions to the development of medical science.
Last but not lead, the researcher aim to minimize the suffering that animal experience. Due to the significant increase of the social awareness about protect animals, the scientist pay attention to the pain that creatures have to suffer during the test and they have some solution like some special medicine or food to help animals feel better.
In conclusion, use animals for research is necessary for human to develop the new drugs and medical procedures. At this moment , I think it is the best choice for us before we can find another solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96350364964 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73864296491 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3397502041 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311595395918 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10719129549 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116710332619 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192455985596 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144128327993 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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