Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays there are several social media websites that have become part of everyone's life. Almost everyone has their account on at least one social media website and use it as a platform for sharing. Some people believe that sharing personal information via social media websites has a share of risks. While others think that social media pose no dangers over the sharing of personal information. I believe that sharing data over any social media website has considerable risks. Recently there have been many incidents indicating the potential dangers of passing information over personal information.
Sharing the data over social media can make your data vulnerable to hackers or it can be used by the social media website's developers as well. To illustrate this point we can take the example of the biggest social media website, Facebook. In recent years many allegations are made on Facebook. Surprisingly, Facebook has agreed to many of these allegations. Facebook agreed publicly that it saves the photo's that are shared over it's website. This is a serious threat to personal information. The recent growth in cybercrime has also made hackers intercept the messages being sent and gather information. This can also include sensitive information as well. So, there are greater threats to the information we share than people know.
Personal information shared on social networking sites can be used in various ways by people. We can take the tweet made by the security head of Adhar card(Identification of an Indian) as an example. The security head of Adhar card had tweeted his Adhar card number and challenged that there is no way someone can get information by this number. But within 24 hours numerous people had tweeted his various personal details like his mobile number, bank details, wife details, etc. So this is a clear indication that there are numerous ways through which small information on a social website can be used for illegal purposes. Hackers can get information on maiden's name, first school name, cat name, etc and can use them to hack the bank accounts.
In conclusion personal information can be used in a wide range of ways without our knowledge. Sharing this kind of information over social media publicly will pose a grave threat and can be used for many illicit ways. So people should be thoughtful and cautious when sharing any data via social media.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al media websites has a share of risks. While others think that social media pose no ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while, at least, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07360406091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6649951655 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469543147208 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8537537367 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.2916666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95833333333 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331653696987 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120293454265 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117795106995 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24209874188 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137612518873 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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