The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that people nowadays would presumably take advantages from advertising restriction because of its useless purpose and damaging possibility. Although this can add benefits to our society, the returns are justifiable.
To begin with, there are reasonable reasons why advertising should be banned for humankind’s benefit. First, the frequency of ads appears discomfort due to the fact that it disturbs people’s work and relaxation. For instance, the pumping out of advertisement on the internet leads to the obnoxious distraction when doing research online and insertion of ads during TV dramas and movies. Second, adverts recently are filled with exaggeration and eye-binding techniques which causes overshadow the true functions of products. Apparently, impulsive purchase witnessed a significant risen, especially in young consumers.
On the other hand, the restriction of adverts may bring an adverse influence to the society due to several reasons. First, thanks to the development of advertising technology, consumers get a slice of cake from a wide range of options as can find the optimal items in accordance with their current economic ability. For example, people nowadays may seek through different types of smartphones on the Internet and get the best items contributing to the enhancement of their comforts and standard of living. Furthermore, advertisement has been playing a pivotal role in economic development as it boosts the consumption demand. The advertising industry promotes production and commerce and creates a widen job market for labors.
In conclusion, it is safe to say that advertising is necessary but it needs to be controlled. Individuals may gain both considerable benefits and drawbacks through the growing prevalence of advertisements and make a wisely choice on purchasing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6884057971 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26532706609 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8504977398 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166800296502 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504654650896 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425342237181 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100867927363 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310631770067 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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