In some countries, criminal trials are shown on TV and the general public can watch them.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, people in some nations are able to watch criminal trials on the television. Personally, I believe that this trend would bring more positive impact to society.
It is true that broadcasting the course may spoil the identity of the victims who attend the courtroom. In some cases, the victim is hurt not only their body but also their mind which could lead to depression or stress. For example, the victim's identity in some criminal cases like rape, kidnap, or torture had better be a secret to not be ashamed in their daily life. If the television broadcasts the criminal trials, the viewer could find out the victim’s information and start to look for their private life, which is really annoying and does detrimental harm to their life.
However, letting the public watch the criminal trials would be a great way to diminish the crime rate. By seeing those judgments on television, people who plan to commit crimes would be calm, and they will be able to take time to think more wisely about what they are going to come up against if they do something illegal. These shows would calm people, be in hesitation and maybe stop them from committing crimes. Because the majority of crime committed takes place when they are in a bad mood like angry or depressed, making them unable to fully observe the consequences of their action. Therefore, The Court of Justice On the Media would let people think twice before doing something bad.
In conclusion, I would argue that television should show the court to the public to reduce the crime rate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'victims'' or 'victim's'?
Suggestion: victims'; victim's
... depression or stress. For example, the victims identity in some criminal cases like ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78308823529 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38824333072 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.371537211 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.416666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129130646354 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532912766662 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058000600317 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769025072825 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332313449807 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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