Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
There are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that advertisements are advantageous for companies and people while others emphasize advertisements leave a negative impact.
On the one side, various factors make a section of people advocate that posting advertisements have a positive effect and have many reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost, it is the source of information for people which leaves an impact on them. To illustrate, When a company launches its new product, people know about its importance through commercial television ads, leaflets, and many others platforms. This impact generates the popularity of that product. Another example of the impact on the market, when a brand new phone is launched in the telecom industry, firms advertise it new features and price in the market. These features can be useful for people and modern society. Thus, both people and businesses gain huge profits by marketing their products through advertisements.
On the flip side, advertisements can leave detrimental effects on society for a myriad of reasons. Chiefly, sometimes most of the addicted shoppers buy unnecessary items from the market because of more and more adverts for their items. Besides, many consumers are not able to afford the branded products which are shown in ads because of their high costs. Yet still, people bought such things on credit that can be left trouble in managing the basic necessities of a monthly expense. For instance, buying a brand new car by watching advertisements even people have one is absolutely a waste of money. As a result, spending a lot of money on non-useful things instead of saving is one of the negative effects that people should make the decision wisely in buying such things.
In my profound opinion, although advertising the products have a great impact on people and firms, their drawbacks could not be neglected by society. Therefore, creating awareness among the people may reduce the negative effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16099071207 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81885442099 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 323.0 20.2975951904 1591% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1667.0 106.682146367 1563% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 323.0 20.7667163134 1555% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 81.0 7.06120827912 1147% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167863494277 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167863494277 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117515006336 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292529357284 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 164.4 13.0946893788 1255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -264.83 50.2224549098 -527% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 130.4 11.3001002004 1154% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.13 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.71 8.58950901804 276% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 131.2 10.1190380762 1297% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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