Some parents believe that watching and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by reading books. Do you agree or disagree?
Education is now one of the most controversial issues that people like debating about. Thus, every parents are caring about how to educate their children. It is considered by some parents that parents should prohibit children from playing games in order to study or read books. However, I don't agree about this opinion.
To begin with, as the game industry have been progressing, numerous games have been appearing increasingly. Therefore, plenty of children are interested in games, and it is true that they spend tons of time to play games. Nevertheless, I believe that parents don't have to block children from playing games. Because, they can relieve stress by playing games. Furthermore, playing games can help to make a good friendship with friends. In addition, a number of people are working in game company these days, because the industry of game have improved significantly. A lot of professional gamers got popular and famous nowadays. Playing games may be another opportunity for children.
Meanwhile, some parents believe that most games exert a negative influence on children, because they lost their time to study or read books by playing games. Playing games for a long time may generate health problem. For example, there was a person who died cause of playing games for a long time in Korea. For that reason, my parents also prevented me from enjoying games, when i was a kid. Besides, there are a huge amount of violent games that exert a negative effect on children, such as shooting games, battle games.
In conclusion, although it is argued by some parents that parents should prohibit children from playing games, I totally disagree about their opinion. Because, I believe that it is too old-fashion opinion, and game industry are progressing more and more as time goes by. Moreover, if children have a good ability at playing games, it may be good opportunity to become a famous professional gamer. Hence, in my opinion, thinking that playing games is always bad is too old-fashion opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05988023952 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68272829178 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491017964072 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7757445851 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4761904762 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2606017278 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869627443184 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076464665804 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17434947925 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208461281767 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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