Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want.
Is this a good way to raise children?
What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
Since ancient times people have been caring about their children and they have been trying to give them all what little ones want. An opinion exists that some people do everything what the kids tell them, and give children anything what they ask FOR. I am convinced that, this way to raise children is wrong and this can lead to terrible consequences.
Firstly, a child raised in this way will not be socialized and life in THE society will be difficult for them. People who are allowed everything in their childhood will not adapt the fact that life is not easy. For example according to statistics provided in the internet poll, 50% of people who grow up like this do not find their place in their lives. Hence, indulging all the whims of children will lead to their not being ready for the authentically world.
Secondly, in life such people will bring discomfort not only to themselves but also everyone around. Such persons will demand a lot from others without doing anything in return and any refusal will cause hysteria. For example famous actor Macaulay Culkin asked for too much without compromising and he lost his job and by this he ruined the life not only of himself but also of his mother. Thus, humans raised in this way do not understand renouncement and by their actions can harm others.
To conclude, this kind of upbringing is not just wrong, it also leads to horrible consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s way will not be socialized and life in THE society will be difficult for them. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74796747967 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40808287037 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581300813008 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3611456176 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340859968578 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122309359618 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819082694912 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189507537714 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130643565479 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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