Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that death penalty is unacceptable in contemporary society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The question of the offenders’ punishment has always been debatable in all the societies. Some people believe that people who perpetrated murder or a terror attack should be punished by death sentences, while others think that this measure is not appropriate in the modern world. Although death penalty can be a useful mechanism in crime prevention, I strongly believe that this measure may lead to possible errors of judgment.
On the one hand, the statement that some offences should be punished by death penalty is justified. For instance, according to the social interviews among casualties and independent people in USA in 2012, which showed that 80 percent of responders think that murders deserve the strongest penalty. Therefore, some countries and some states of America choose the death penalty for terrorists, murders and rapists. In such way governments try to protect their citizens and prevent the tendency of law-breakers. Thus, this measure helps to confront with criminals and keep them scared.
On the other hand, death sentence is a last century, because today’s world called humane solutions for everybody. Proceeding from this, some authorities prefer to balance and do not go to extremes, tacking a humane approach to the problem. For example, according to the researches by The Moscow Medical University, it has been proven that murders and terrorist have a specific types of disability, such as mental, intellectual or psychosocial problems. To my mind, a such people should be in prisons and should have a medical treatment, because the execution deprives of life but does not resolve the problem of offence or casualties. In other words, the human solution may prevent possible errors of judgment and save more lives.
In conclusion, it is necessary to say that our today’s world called contemporary decisions and measures but different governments reserve the right to use capital punishments or not.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33550488599 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86913185128 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1307058691 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207203294374 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684971513046 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689814664827 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118733821448 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562003349945 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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