Some people are of the opinion that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others believe that advertisements tells us about new products that may improve our lives.
What is your opinion about this?
People hold different views when discussing issues relating to advertisement. While some people believe it propels the public to purchase what is not needed, others, on the other hand holds a belief it enlightens us about things that will benefit us. Personally, I think such publication makes us go overboard as what we finally purchase are totally useless most times.
There are compelling reasons why I believe that product promotion moves us to buying things that are mostly not useful. Firstly, the advertisement comes in a convincing and beautiful way. This tends to happen when these companies present their products in an attractive way without showing us the drawback. For instance, as a first time expectant mother, most of the things we buy while awaiting our baby's arrival is a Baby cot which usually becomes useless when the baby finally arrives as babies rarely sleep calmly in it.
Secondly, some announcement comes with discount. This usually happens when some companies or superstores are auctioning their supplies. People tends to many things especially the ones with very low prices without checking it's usefulness. For example, during last year Black Friday, my mother ordered for an high heeled shoe on the store's pamphlet because it was very cheap. She finally abandon it because she could not use it.
In conclusion, product promotion are done in a very attractive way and sometimes with discounted prices. All these make people to buy many things/products that are literally useless.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an attractive way" with adverb for "attractive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... these companies present their products in an attractive way without showing us the drawback. For in...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ear Black Friday, my mother ordered for an high heeled shoe on the stores pamphlet...
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Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'abandons'.
Suggestion: abandons
... because it was very cheap. She finally abandon it because she could not use it. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21721311475 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71011361426 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643442622951 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6282261739 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9285714286 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236368323445 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755199849087 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690028806517 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133784181518 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651441918916 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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