Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People's opinions differ as to whether or not allowing children to make their own decisions in regarding to their interest on everyday activities such as clothes, foods or entertainment activities. Although I understand the reason why some people are afraid that free choice for children can lead to selfishness, I would strongly support the idea that they should be entitled to self-decision under parental guidance.
On the one hand, I accept that children could become inconsiderate when being given the right to decide. Firstly, being immature means that children are unable to perceive a problem in many aspects so their choice could mostly be ineffective or even harmful. This is clearly reflected by watching kids eating habits from which they are usually hyperactive due to their strong taste for fast food, soda or a range of sweet desserts. Secondly, it is human instincts for anyone to make a decision in favor of their own benefits including children. If free choices are available from early-stage, selfishness as well as demanding behavior is inevitable.
On the other hand, instructing children to decide for the manors is beneficial to the child itself and the society in due course. Initially, parents could allow children to have the freedom of choice as long as their duty is performed. This could be seen as continuous training for kids and decision-making to become more responsible for all consequences. Also, decisiveness from early education would be an advantage when they grow up as it is a beneficial quality required in a competitive job market.
In conclusion, self-decision could have some drawbacks, but I believe that the benefits outweigh them in the long-term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
Peoples opinions differ as to whether or not allowing children to make their own dec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22262773723 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99448273454 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7683249853 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244196986235 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908116634762 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092667098612 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148969702319 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839840413803 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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