Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people consider that innate characteristics are responsible for the fact that people tend to become a violent crime of the social problems. While some people believe that crime may a result from natural characteristics of violence or greed, I would argue that crime as a consequence of social issues and poverty.
This is belief that person’s nature characteristics determine whether or not they become a criminal. Firstly, some people argue that person who is cruel more easily than a kind person. For instance, the boys bullying the girls or other boys may turn into a violence crime in the future. Secondly, people with an bad characteristic such as laziness or selfishness could also breed future offenders, who seek to gain easy money without working hard. Thus, this is increase significantly the crime rate, instead of working hard to make an honest living. There are other reasons for thinking about people who have an inborn bad nature is more likely to break the law.
Nevertheless, it seem for me that social issues and poverty is mainly cause behind crime. There are a number of mainly issues of increase the crime rate in the public. For instance, unemployment push people in to resorting to crime, because they simply can not find a stable job. As a consequence, the number of crime has increased dramatically in many countries for the decades recently. In the other opinion, poverty in generall lead to a rise in crime. If people have not enough money to pay cost of living, they have to steal money from other people just to support themselves and their families.
In conclusion, although both views is reasonable for the different aspects, but it seem to me that principal cause of crime are a result of social condition and other relevent problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96333333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76390223336 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5088716452 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340852213149 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113583677984 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692384199859 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2163885407 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478063075107 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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