Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People hold conflicting views about the best measure to address atrocious problems. While a large number of individuals assert that acceptance is the best solution to a bad situation like unsatisfactory work or lack of money, I would argue that there is a more efficacious option which is attempting and improving such situations.
There are various compelling reasons why people have a tendency to accept situations while facing dilemmas. The first reason is that those situations may be beyond their ability to resolve. If the problems are so difficult that no matter how hard people try, individuals still cannot tackle them, most people are likely to give up, which means they accept their failures as well as the bad situations. The second reason is that many people are satisfied with what they are having. That is to say, they do not like facing up to changes and challenges which are usually risky and require considerable effort.
On the other hand, I firmly hold the view that individuals should strive for solutions in order to improve difficult situations. Firstly, with the advancement of the world regarding technology, there are almost no problems without at least a solution. This could be explained by the fact that people have made innovative machines which make a great contribution to reducing noise pollution which has a detrimental effect on individuals’ health. Secondly, while striving to address unfavorable situations, not only can people figure out their abilities, but also develop their skills, which can help them to have more opportunities in work and study. Therefore, they are capable of living their lives to the fullest.
In conclusion, while there are a host of reasons why people choose to accept unfavorable situations, I still agree with those thinking that trying and improving such situations are the better choices
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...re to address atrocious problems. While a large number of individuals assert that acceptance is t...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...lest. In conclusion, while there are a host of reasons why people choose to accept ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, at least, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19933554817 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81057232331 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6451569856 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0769230769 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213519959345 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743244421962 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771234578292 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160490348814 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857247711625 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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