some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic World. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Essay topics:

some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic World. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Lifestyle has undergone drama changes over a couple of decades. Presently, some proportion of masses believe that sharing information publicly is good as it is fruitful for people. By contrast others have conflicting views.

There are manifold points to support the former view. First and foremost, sharing information is useful for people as well as student .for example, people can get useful strategies and innovative
Ideas through information, beside this, students can improve their academic skills by attaining more information. Therefore, sharing information is the need of an hour. What is more, information shared freely is lucrative for scientist and administration. To be specific, other scientists can use information in their researchs and government also get name and fame worldwide with the help of shared information.

Numerous points can be mentioned in the latter view. Initially, administration may face some problem if information is shared freely. To illustrate, some unauthorized person use information in a wrong way it may put bad impact on nation's name. As a result, this idea does not fully holds the water.Moreover, in this era of competitive world it is very hard to survive in every field without doing something unique so if a person want to to the zenith of success he must not share information publicly. Hence, folks can find difficulties if information is shared freely.

To recapitulate, it is well said that share is care. Undeniably, there are some bad effects of this trend. However, still I believe that this idea deserve appreciation as it useful for the betterment of people's career.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, as a result, as well as, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33204633205 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0732038532 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 66.4585161962 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341212711055 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112158363318 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803975634505 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180765749812 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478795500194 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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