Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that professional people who know about science, business, and academic issues should share their information. But other people believe there are some information that they are very vittal and important and these information should not share.
In science world there are many problems and also there are many solution for these problem, but these solution are not always correct. In science there are many issues that are not certain. So, if researchers share these information, it can be cause of many problems in future. Furthermore, there are some problems in the world that they can be very horrible for normal people and knowledge about these problems can scares them while scientists can solve them.
However, there are some information that are not very critical and people can know about them. For example, information about some bussines approaches and academic topics are usually sutaible to share with other people. Shareing these information has some advantages too. For instance, information about a new bussines approach is usually simple and most of university students or some of regular people can understand it. Therefore, they can help to improve the solution and make new ideas.
In my opinion, some information that are very important and they are still inn research stage, should not shared with other people, but there are some information about simple issues that are not very vittal, so, it is a good idea that professionals share them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... they are very vittal and important and these information should not share. In science world t...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'many solutions'.
Suggestion: many solutions
...re are many problems and also there are many solution for these problem, but these solution a...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...ms and also there are many solution for these problem, but these solution are not always corr...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this solution' or 'these solutions'?
Suggestion: this solution; these solutions
...re many solution for these problem, but these solution are not always correct. In science ther...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...e not certain. So, if researchers share these information, it can be cause of many problems in fu...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
...archers share these information, it can be cause of many problems in future. Furthermore...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ation, it can be cause of many problems in future. Furthermore, there are some problems i...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...le to share with other people. Shareing these information has some advantages too. For instance, ...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'share'
Suggestion: share
...re still inn research stage, should not shared with other people, but there are some i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24686192469 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55750891999 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451882845188 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7045829032 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365902623817 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169596345368 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13850910979 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255907789565 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086822828728 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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