Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are a variety of opinions about sharing information to other people around the world. Some people seem it as a positive thing, while some people think that the information is too vital for themselves to be share without any feedback. In my opinion, I tend to share information to others in different areas because its benefits overweight the disadvantages.
Sharing information not only stimulates people’s brains but arouses their ambitions. In other words, it is a good way to improve themselves and foster their innovation. People can receive the latest news to make some changes in their work and lives. For instance, scientists publish their essays around the world, then other scientists can refer these papers and essays to improve their experimental processes and details to make experiment much better. What’s more, they can try to combine different methods to get an unpredictable results. In other academic world, it is also a good chance to make a big progress by exchanging and discussing information with each other.
However, when it comes to business area, the information would possibly be too valuable to share others like marketing Strategies and technical skills . These information may be tested, analyzed and discussed for a long time by numbers of people, so the information is belongs to the companies only. If the information is told to others some day, the companies will lose an opportunity to be the pioneer and lead to unpredicted loss. Also, someone will copy the useful part of the information to earn money or expand his/her business. This is unfair for the people who have researched it for years.
In conclusion, except for business secrets, the other information should be shared as much as possible. It is good for human beings to make a huge progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 611, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'big progress'.
Suggestion: big progress
...world, it is also a good chance to make a big progress by exchanging and discussing informatio...
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Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...arketing Strategies and technical skills . These information may be tested, analyz...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'These informations'?
Suggestion: This information; These informations
...eting Strategies and technical skills . These information may be tested, analyzed and discussed f...
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Line 13, column 141, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge progress'.
Suggestion: huge progress
...le. It is good for human beings to make a huge progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, while, except for, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15540540541 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88304762913 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5713903789 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417167958752 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137139612758 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875445225896 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263144815447 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658932233621 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.