Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?
Nowadays, diversity and difference become the most level in the world. It is often argued that there are many choices to buy or have something while the others do not agree. I strongly agree with this statement because options can come varieties all areas of life and it can create a new business competition.
On one hand, some people simplistically claim that these choices cause people to take decision harder. In other words, they spend time on thinking mostly and it affects decision making. Therefore, they can become unstable because of this. However, there is little evidence to support te this view decision making is much more slower than the last time when they can make more accurate decisions for themselves now. For example, there are many job opportunities today and so they can eliminate to find a correct one. That's why these choices can make them provide a better life.
On the other hand, there is a view that many choices can provide competition such as quality and price between companies. That is to say that, they have to produce both more quality products and correct price.If there is no competition, companies can make increase the price level. For instance, there are the two same products such as milk which were produced by different companies in the market and customer can select one of them what they want. Therefore, this diversity can be better both customers and companies.
To sum up, although some people assume that many choices are not essential, actually, those can help to increase rivalry and provide correct decision making. Personally, I believe that opportunities should increase in every subject because anybody does not want to look like similar to each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'slower' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: slower
...rt te this view decision making is much more slower than the last time when they can make m...
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ey can eliminate to find a correct one. Thats why these choices can make them provide...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...more quality products and correct price.If there is no competition, companies can ...
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Line 6, column 87, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...ny choices are not essential, actually, those can help to increase rivalry and provide co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01048951049 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50912803724 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7670997462 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127432877174 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456334672636 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383556144324 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866797675238 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316034906506 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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