Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people have different opinions about how to prosecute individuals who make a crime. While some argue that it will be easier to use established rules on certain criminals, I believe that it will be better if we consider other factors that commit the crime to determine the penalty.
On the one hand, fixed punishments will create a deterring effect on society, which also makes a stable and secure society. If people know they will get a particular penalty for a certain crime, they will try their best to stay away from crimes and comply with the laws. For example, in Vietnams’ criminal code, the person engaged in killing will have to pay compensation to the victim and will be imprisoned for a certain amount of time.
On the other hand, there are various reasons why crime should be judged bases on different factors. The main explanation that supports the view is that some claim that many circumstances can motivate people to act illegally. Poverty, for instance, can push people to the corner and make them have negative thoughts that cause them to commit a crime. Furthermore, in some cases, the court must consider whether the defendant shows any sign of repentance after the crime committed. If a person commits a crime and have a sense of guilt and wishes to confess to the police, the court will reduce the punishments rate for them as a way to alleviate anxiety and an effective way to help them return to their honest life.
In conclusion, although fixed punishments are necessary to control humans’ behaviors, it seems to me that we should notice on the circumstances of a crime, and the motivation for committing it when it comes to setting the penalty for offenders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81506849315 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65791375627 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2941759276 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.818181818 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389183426753 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13856772419 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691612637601 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242202067092 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557075885022 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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