Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.Do you agree or disagree.
Money plays a vital role in developmentof the nation. All people earned money to fulfill their needs and demands. In the current time of technological advancement, one of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic that should dwellers pay their earning tax to authorities or should save money? I completely disagree with the statement and shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are number of reasons why taxes are important. First of all, if some people earning a lot of money and paying tax to the government , and government also provides many facilities to the every individual in the field of education,transport ,health and so on. For example, If we paying the taxes, government gave the pensions to the old age persons, which is helpful in the future, and government also provide free treatment in the hospital and added best doctors in the field of medical. Furthermore, government also provide best education in the schools and could hire professional teachers who teaches their student to become knowledgeable.
Moving furthur, government provide free transportation facilities to the dwellers to maintain public transportion, such as expanding roads and highways and replacing old transportation methods. So, it is only possible if everyone give tax. Morever, tax play crucial role to improve the standard of infrastructure and so on.
As we have seen that there are number of answer to this question. On balance, however , I tend to believe that taxes are very beneficial for the development of the people as well as the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23754789272 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06520954407 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590038314176 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5157344342 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205636886712 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689323808434 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707518125373 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115887349416 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675858238836 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.