Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can’t afford.
What are the reasons for this behaviour?
What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
We are living in the society full of people with high level of consumerism. They like to purchase some products that they do not really need it and actually will not use it. Through this habit, they more likely to be in debt and there must be an action that can prevent people to not follow this habit in daily life.
There are numerous of factors why people like to spend their money on useless things. Firstly, it can happen when your surrounding are full of people who like to keep being trendy or updated with some sort of stuffs. Therefore, they will eventually purchasing the same goods so they will not feel left out or want to feel accepted in society. Besides that, your psychology can also be the reason behind this issue. With some products being advertised with some marketing level, people are being lured in to buy it even though they do not actually want it, it just the advertisement that trick our brain.
People keep buying things because they have credit card which they believe it will help them to buy things easier although the do not have the money at the moment. Also some products can be purchased by installment. Those things make people unaware of their financial and ended up with tons of debt. Some actions have to be done in order to demolish this habit for good. One has to have a good control towards consumerism habit and can manage their money so they will only spend on necessary goods. Nonetheless, governments also can raised the tax for some products, so, people might reconsider to buy it.
It is not easy to obliterate this habit, not to mention that this has already occured for a long time. But, it has to be taken care of, therefore, people can live more peacefully without being chased with some rentiners.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'purchase'
Suggestion: purchase
...stuffs. Therefore, they will eventually purchasing the same goods so they will not feel le...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...help them to buy things easier although the do not have the money at the moment. Also ...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...he do not have the money at the moment. Also some products can be purchased by insta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, nonetheless, really, so, therefore, as to, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6050955414 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2847427634 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535031847134 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5852848801 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406714027991 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141948848027 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673925200656 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275499376304 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442734396578 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.