Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people argue that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is argued that viewers are often bound to purchase the marketed products under the influence of advertising. However, another side states that due to its prevalence, this marketing method has failed to draw consumers' attention. I contend that the impact of advertising is still significant despite its ubiquity in our lives for its increasing dynamic tactics.
On the one hand, the primary reason why people deem advertising fails to be efficient is due to the subconscious avoiding attitude induced by its ever-increasing presence. As enterprises invest heavily in marketing tactics to boost consumers' awareness of their products, we are bombarded with numerous advertisements especially when utilizing online platforms with a massive number of users like Youtube, Facebook and Instagram. As a consequence, this overuse of ads has engendered frustration as well as stress which ultimately prompt people to avoid or ignore ads if they can. Another possible cause is that advertisings often convey unrealistic images of the marketed subject thus they are overlooked as an unreliable source of information. In that case, advertisers fail to capture attention as people would seek for other resources or probably gain first-hand experience with the products.
On the other hand, I believe that advertisements will remain a powerful tool for companies and enterprises, its predominance notwithstanding. First of all, a wide variety advertising techniques are still being developed under numerous experiments. As a result, marketers will be able to come up with methods that match the customers' needs, hence, it would increase their chance of persuading potential buyers. Moreover, with the incorporation of creativity and the use of public figures in many popular brands, like Adidas or Coca Cola, people are imperceptibly influenced to purchase those items. In all probability, the more original the ads are, the higher the likelihood the customers will be drawn to those marketed products.
In conclusion, even though some people might dismiss advertising as no longer influential, I deem that it will still grow as more and more convincing in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23674911661 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01179906142 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600706713781 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2264413238 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179006915038 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057829005361 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478578688272 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112640499666 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496675536828 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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